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- Brutal tests with scoring and basic fixes
- Redline Engine bit builder
- Browser Material Vault
- Daily practice reps
comedy training games ยท brutal feedback ยท free ยท 18+
Paste one joke, story, or set. Get a score, see what died, and leave with a sharper next move before you risk it onstage.
No signup required. Paste one joke and get the brutal test first.
Bombed.app gives you that feedback instantly and privately so you can fix weak punchlines, strengthen hooks and tags, and walk into real rooms with material that's already been tested.
Direct notes on where the setup sags, where the punch misses, and what to cut.
The room is tough on the writing, not the writer. Ego gets roasted. Identity does not.
Test a version, tighten it, save it, and test the next pass without waiting for stage time.
Drop the messy draft in. Leave with a sharper version and a cleaner next rep.
Drop in a joke, story, 2-minute set, or messy personal experience.
The AI simulates a tough comedy club audience, scores the material, and identifies weak spots.
Receive clear notes, stronger punchlines, suggested tags, and specific improvements.
Store the best versions in your browser vault and keep tightening the bit.
The toolkit is built for daily reps: score, roast, rebuild, rehearse, save.
Tap a card to flip it. Steal these. Drill them until they're reflex.
The writers' room in a box. Paste a joke for a brutal score, or drop a true premise into the Redline Engine and build the whole bit: setup โ surprise โ punch โ tag โ tag โ callback โ hard button.
Punch up, not down โ the engine only swings at ego, choices, and you. Everything here is a draft. Your taste is the last edit.
Your built bit lands here โ seven labeled beats, ready to punch up. Hit Write the bit.
Paste a joke, story, or set. The Pass marks it up against the comedy laws: word economy, specificity, punch-up, missing tags, and weak buttons.
Your saved drafts stay in this browser so you can keep testing versions without losing the good stuff.
Heads up: the vault lives only in this browser on this device. Clearing browser data or switching phones wipes it โ copy your keepers somewhere safe too.
No saved material yet. Run a Brutal Test, then save the draft.
Read the full pilot: REDLINE CLUB โ Ep. 01
One premise. Six comedians. Same idea, six different laughs. Delivery is the joke. Pick a premise:
The tools on this page are free. When you want ongoing human-grade cleanup on your material, go Pro or Stage Ready โ monthly, cancel anytime.
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Delivered by email: send your set right after checkout and your marked-up version comes back to your inbox.
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Delivered by email: send your material after checkout and get it back rebuilt, stage-ready.
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Not ready for a monthly? Get one bit fixed, one time, no subscription:
$9.99 Starter Pack (one joke, scored and sharpened) ยท $19 Fast Clip Pack (rewrite + Shorts hook) ยท $49 Comic Cleanup (full stage-ready rebuild)
One payment. Delivered to your inbox. That's it. ยท See what a real fix returns โ
Test your first joke for free. No sign-up needed to try the brutal test.
New bits, new shows, new game drops โ straight from the club. No spam, leave anytime.
Type a topic and a personal "tell" (a habit, a flaw, an opinion). The Lab hands you a skeleton for each technique. You fill the punchline โ that's the work.
Your joke skeletons will appear here. The blanks are where your brain does push-ups.
Roasting is love with a knife. Punch up at the ego, never down at things people can't change. Keep it about choices, habits, and the bit โ not race, gender, disability, or anything that turns a roast into a hate crime. Get consent. Then go in.
Generated lines are templates โ punch them up, make them specific. Specificity is what makes a roast deadly.
๐ด Want the full pilot? Read REDLINE CLUB โ Ep. 01 โ a ~20-min audio-ready set with host lines, crowd/bell cues, Heckler School, and the "Say It 6 Ways" engine.
The stage where every pro was once garbage. Here's the playbook.
Your best joke goes first, not last. You haven't earned patience yet. Hook them in the first 15 seconds or you're talking to phones.
Setup โ punch โ tag โ next. Don't explain. If it needs explaining, it's not a joke yet, it's a paragraph.
Shut up and let them laugh. Stepping on your own laugh kills the next three jokes.
Bomb gracefully: "That one's still in beta." A clean acknowledgment buys back the room. Panic loses it.
Close on the biggest laugh and get off stage. Leave them wanting, not checking the time.
AI won't make you funny. It makes a funny person faster. Use it as a writers' room that never sleeps โ for angles, alts, tags, and punch-ups. The taste is still yours.
Premise โ 10 alt punchlines (misdirection), ranked, <12 words.
Joke โ write me 3 tags on the same setup.
Joke โ 6 comedian styles back-to-back.
Joke โ brutal edit for word economy & rhythm.